A story
One time me and friends were out on a day and we went on a train. And thud the train stopped
We all got up and headed to the front of the train. We look out the window and saw a creature
It smashed the train we ran to the back as we were heading. Everyone on the train was dead.
We jumped off the train and ran to a haunted train yard. Glass was everywhere.we were hungry we
cared on. We saw a sushi shop so we went to it. It smelt like flesh but it was delicious then we went to
the back and… the meat of the sushi was human meat. I feel something over my mouth that goes
black… we all wake up in a room. I reach for my phone. I check the time is 3 am. The last time I checked
it last was 5 pm. It's been that long, the lights flash on it blinds me for a second. Click clank i hear chans
my eyes come back to me i look around i see my friends are in half. I hear a saw go on it comes closer
to me and it cuts me in half. The end.
Kia Ora Caleb,
ReplyDeleteThat's a very frightening story. I won't be going to a haunted train yard anytime soon and may avoid my corner sushi shop for a little while also. I like your short, direct sentences.
There are quite a few poets that passionate about trains but Henry David Thoreau was indifferent. He wrote this poem titled: "What’s the railroad to me?"
What's a railroad to me?
I never go to see
Where it ends.
It fills a few hollows,
And makes banks for the swallows,
It sets the sand a-blowing,
And the blackberries a-growing.
-Henry David Thoreau
Actually, Thoreau wrote about (and rode the train) quite a bit back in the 1840s. Agatha Christie wrote a very famous crime story about "Murder on the Orient Express." You might like reading it someday. One of my favourite artists, Claude Monet, painted a series of Impressionist paintings in train stations. He painted right on the tracks. Have you ever been on a train or train trip before? I know you like trains, that's why I ask? What's you favorite train engine?